So I finally got to the shootout at the campground--I simplified the scene a little and had Jordy simply stand up at the wrong moment and get winged. My writing group approves of the part where Mrs Goodnight and her grandson return fire from the house. Elderly ladies in pink housecoats, carrying deer rifles, amuse them.

This scene sets up Gareth getting released by the cops, and also causes Jordy to start wondering why he was so sure Ted Goodnight was Mr. Goodnight. Which eventually leads him toward the solution of the mystery.